The Mausoleum Part 7

in story-mentor •  7 years ago  (edited)

This is a part of the Storytelling Mentorship Group by @michelle.gent

As those of you following the story will notice, it is slow in coming but at its own time. I was going to wait and post more of the story when more of it is written. However, I chose to go ahead and post what I have in hopes you will continue to follow Victoria and Darius's story revolving around the mausoleum.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4 – includes review of first parts
Part 5
Part 6

The Mausoleum Part 7

Darius walks toward the limousine where Charles is waiting for him.

He then motions Charles over to his side while opening the door.

Charles lends support.

With tears in his eyes, Darius says, “She’s my wife, Charles. She’s my wife.”

“Did you see how beautiful she is? She has always had such lovely hair.”
“The roses were to remind her of our last time together.”

Charles, “I can’t believe she didn’t recognize you.”

Darius, “We get new forms when we return Charles.”

Charles, “Are you going to tell her?”

Darius, “I can’t it’s against the rules, they’ll know and I won’t be allowed to return.”

Charles, “Why do they have that rule?”

Darius, “I don’t know.”

Darius looks out the window, “Besides it would be too painful for her to find out. I cannot stay and this body is too old now and it won’t regenerate. I need the orb so I can go.”

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Traveling down the cemetery road they finally reach the gate.

Darius leans forward and places his hand on his face.
“How could I be so stupid to think I could approach her about the orb?”

“I am not ready to let her know I need the orb. I am not even sure she has it.”

Charles, “You have no choice you are dying.”

Victoria enters her home and walks over to her writing desk and stretches the fingers to her lace gloves dropping them one at a time onto the top of the desk.

She then reaches over and picks up the mysterious box and feels it has some weight to it. After a quick inspection, she places it back on the table and begins to tear at the brown paper on it.

Once she removes all the paper she discovers an empty metal box inside with a note instructing her she will find what fits inside the box at the mausoleum. She needs to put it in this box to protect her from its energy.

Now she knows she has no choice but to check for her husband in the crypt. She has finally obtained a court order. Everything is in place and this message arrives a day before with the metal box.

Victoria feels soon she will see her love.

Original writing by @rebeccabe

Original photograph using Canon T6

Thank you for taking this journey with me.

Storytelling Mentorship Group by @michelle.gent

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Can't wait to see how this turns out! Nicely done!

How i have missed this series
Its getting clearer

thanks for coming back.. the next one will be the best .. I must do some work on it though.

Even though it is slow its not a problem because the reason for being slow is quality you got to put in it... You don't need to worry about time just keep bringing these great part.

I appreciate your observation.
Thanks!

Lovely writing :)
And you've taken the perfect pictures for this, the pictures are in perfect sync.

thank you .. It is so fun taking the photos

Really an interesting story. 👍

thank you... it has been a surprising journey for me to write fiction.

It's unfortunate I guess. People who love each other should always be together. Anyways great story.

We'll see what happens... I agree soon I am to introduce a new character.
Thanks for reading.

Oh, so exciting!
Next please.... lol

got it ready only waiting to see what @michelle.gent suggests on my new character that I wrote ...so I can go in and make changes on the next part ..part 8 before posting. I may post tomorrow anyway..it is lots of fun but kind of pressure to get it done each time.

Yes, the new villain Uziel, let's see how you use this character to play out in the story.

your writting skill is so deep......

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

unequalled writing, educative post. thanks for sharing the interesting story with us.

thank you