Wow this one sucked me in! Love the slow build as it gets weirder. I wasn't sure which way you were going. This almost feels like the set up to a movie that would pick up right about where you left off, with protagonist trying to find out more about government program and handlers from the program after him.
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Thank you so much for your comment! Really happy you enjoyed it! And yeah I could be a great set-up for a series or even a movie like you said, but I prefer to end it with an existential crisis for the main character.
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