RE: WW3 SURVIVAL - Part 1-2

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WW3 SURVIVAL - Part 1-2

in survival •  7 years ago 

Interesting read! Just some CC.. Maybe space out your sentences with Tabs/Paragraphs to improve the flow of your text?

Keep at it! :)

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Thanks for the feedback. This is my sons first post and he is trying to go with some creative writing. Not too bad for a 9 year old!

Oh wow! Didn't even notice. He's doing great!

Lol I think that is a great complement! If you don't notice it is a 3rd grader doing the writing then he is off to a good start!