Life, as viewed from the space in between.
Upon this current juncture
To reflect upon after,
From within the throng
Of raw fragility.
Such a trigger in this rigger
To envision such a thing
Askanced via lens
Of fluxed lability.
My dearest mentors Cabe Lindsay,
Eaglespirit and RenSoul,
Have bolstered me throughout
These eight quest weeks.
A true journey it has been
I am grateful to you all,
For the soulful words
Each one did forespeak.
For I have revealed at times
The true nature of myself,
Their response was that of
Endeared true spirit kin.
Swaddled, wrapped as a newborn
Within soulful embrace,
I refocused with the will
To once again begin.
The first time that I read it
Quest topic, Life after life,
I saw it simply as
Placid and pleasant reframe.
All I saw was death
Fashioned light rather than grey,
With their insights now
I don't view it so plain.
Life after life I've flown and grown
Each chapter been renewed,
Upon the raven's wing
The burden all his to contain.
To carry a grizzly bear
From one life to the next,
Persevering solemnly
Forever masking his own pain.
Continuum life after life
Perimeter no bounds defined,
The flux is everlasting
The cycle always new.
Upon sky's dreamscape vision scene
Burdensome bear, pathos of bird,
Bares no weight
When within the space between.
This is both my contribution to the Steemit vision quest hosted by @cabelindsay and steemit poetry school 100 day's of poetry challenge hosted by @d-pend.
You have both helped mould my day's and enhance my existence.
Thank you both for the positivity you bring to this platform.
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Cabe's contribution from week one. Space inbetween had me hooked and has stayed with me.
Sometimes people scare me when they have equal measure of fragility and boldness and a lack of ego.
Cabe your spirit shines in everything you do.
Don't ever stop doing your thing.
It is beautiful.
gb4m 💙
All I saw was death
Fashioned light rather than grey,
With their insights now
I don't view it so plain.
Words are less to explain it, keep sharing your thoughts, thankyou
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Heartouching
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You are a phenomena. This is really deep. Amazing thoughts and the way you have expressed them.
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Beautiful as always..
Your writing is mesmerizing
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There is no doubt that i have read certain religious theories in which it is mentioned that there exist life after death. Every thing will be put before the Creator of this universe and He will decide who is going to Heavens and who is going in the hell.
I do agree with you that it is a continuous process Cycle after Cycle, life is going and going....
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Upon sky's dreamscape vision scene
Burdensome bear, pathos of bird,
Bares no weight
When within the space between.
A beautiful and powerful write of self-recognition and soul healing. Really wonderful work GBM:)
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Life after life
I've searched for you
To help stop the strife
That makes me blue.
You are good
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Wow your words blew me away.
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d'awww, just d'awww. This is the cutest piece about cycles and the circular nature of things and the shout outs to those who pull us through the days into the next, or pull us through this life into the next.
even in the weight the bear carries, we all take turns being the bear, I think.
This was just, for me, a pleasant read - colored by my experiences and my eye.
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Yes, and you continue to fly, flow, grow, growl... You caterpillar in and butterfly out. You and your words continue to travel. I'm thankful for your life. Thankful for your generous way of sharing your life, caring for us.
We celebrate your Creative Spirit, and we appreciate your entry in Steemit Vision Quest.
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