RE: The Journal of Harren Smoulder Entry #11

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The Journal of Harren Smoulder Entry #11

in tabletop-rpg •  7 years ago 

You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

The tentacles each acted on there own while Viktor cackled and slobbered all over himself.
It should be their own instead of there own.

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