This Beautiful Feeling !!!

in untalented โ€ขย  7 years agoย 

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For there is just one life to live

And just one more song to give

And I have waited for so long

To experience

This magic of Utopia

This bright drops of Love Un-hindered

And a glimpse of Paradise Un-quenched



When I see darkness flood your eyes

I feel fiery desire spread

As the wild winds of the dancing hemisphere

My heart thumps in sweetest confusion

As my beat races through a million miles

In a moment's blink, I am senselessly gone

Oh Holies! What is this beautiful feeling?



My belly bursts forth in a Myriad

Of swimming butterflies

My thoughts beat faster than my crazy heart

It races Un-tamed to Lands Un-known

Far into God's blissful Place

As the blazing fire of the mid-day Sun

And as the warm glow of Sun-Set bright

As the Stormy voices of the mighty Oceans

And as the deep silent Waters of the running spring

Are the twin feelings of my intense heart

Oh Blessed! This feeling is beautiful



In the Starry-eyed Twilight Night

And in the cocoon of your enfolded arms

Words run dry where feelings run deep

I see the rainbow beckon in beautiful colours

Plethora rising as the waves of the tides

And honey-combs drip with the sweetness of nature

I am treasured as we thread the paths

Of scented jasmine and crimson-coloured roses

We forever live in each other's dreams

Touched by the depth of our entwined hearts

Oh My ! My! This Love indeed is a beautiful feeling ๐Ÿ’•


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ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

This is a lovely post. Keep it up dear

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Thank you so much @fatherfaith.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

A fantastic touch of finesse, i love this ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Oh thank you so much for your compliments. I am glad you like this.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

My eye were just twitching as this romantic lines of yours came drizzling...

Nice one @edith4angelseu

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Awww..... Thank you for your poetic compliment.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

I go love ooooo

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Yes ooo........ It's very important

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

This is simply fantastic, you never stop making me to build how to write a good poem..... Please teach me too

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

@honourmaus, glad to see you here. You no get wahala. You are good too and you can build poetry if you really look deep enough. There's poetry inside you, all you need to do is to unleash that latent part of you ,let it go, float with it........ And then re-create your feelings in a poetic form.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Thanks for the post and very nice

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

I really appreciate this. I'm happy you like this.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Fantastic post!

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย (edited)

Thaaannnk you.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

@edith4angelseu, not because everyone has said it, this is a 'wow' poem. A beautiful poem. You must have been very romantic. Easy o.lol. I really like this one hmmm

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Thaaaannnnk youuuuu @adore-eu. I'm highly elated by your compliment and I am glad you like it. Hmmmm...... Romantic? Yes I am very, so my imagination is very good at running wild. Thank you once again.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

@edith4angelseu, not because everyone has said it, this is a 'wow' poem. A beautiful poem. You must have been very romantic. Easy o.lol. I really like this one hmmm

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย (edited)

One life to live. The race is man die go. So feelings for love is the music to dance enjoy it Nice one mommy, always on point

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

I couldn't agree with you more. Love is vital to life. Thank you for coming around.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Soooo beautiful Ma!!

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Wow! My darling, I am so glad you could stop by. And thank you for the compliment.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

yes Ma, I was struggling with my laptop this morning but now all is well:)

Steem ON!
hugs to my mama xoxo

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย (edited)

And loads of hugs to my darling. Thank you

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Your way with words.. It's mind-blowing

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Thaaaannnnk youuuuu @penauthor, I am highly honoured.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Hi! @edith4angelseu my poet extraordinaire. Hope the angels in you domain are watching your foot steps. Steem on Lady

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

@praise yes they are. How are you doing? Thank you so much for stopping by. I really appreciate you for your wonderful compliments.