Hello, @abasifreke!
Thank you for another contribution to the Blog category. This is a nice tool, and I appreciate the information you have provided us with. Keep up the good work.
In terms of content, I like all the information included in your review. Not only is your post informative and well-illustrated with quality screenshots, but it is also editorial. I appreciate the fact that you took the time to give insights on your personal experience with this tool, however I have to say that I wish you had provided us with more information on this matter.
That said, there were issues of style and proofreading, and I'd be happy to cite a few examples in a follow-up comment, if you wish.
I look forward to your next contribution.
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Thanks @lordneroo for the review. I’ll love to see my mistakes so that I can learn and improve my grammar
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Hello!
I will cite a few examples for you:
As I have said before, long and convoluted sentences affect comprehension, and lead to errors.
Let me rephrase for you: "One fateful day, I shared my experience with my friends who were tech geeks at that time, and they advised me to get an application called ”the noRoot firewall” from Google PlayStore, which I did, and since then the amount of internet data used by my smartphone has decreased/has been reduced."
This sentence should read: "Before I started having difficulties managing the internet data on my Android device, I had an iPhone which I was using; therefore, taking control over the applications which could access the Internet was made easy by the developers."
Furthermore, I think that you need to do a better job with your paragraphing. The post contains too many short paragraphs, which makes it hard for the readers to get a flavour of the key points for the whole text. Your paragraphs should be between four to eight sentences long, and each paragraph should discuss one main, identifiable idea.
I hope you will find this comment useful.
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Thanks alot
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Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!
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