Alone with the ocean. || Original Story #1.

in writing •  7 years ago 

It was midnight.
Lauren was in the beach. Her only company were the sea breeze, the ocean and the moon.
Numerous thoughts were on her mind.

Was it worth it?
Am I wrong?
Is this okay?

The ocean look paceful. She felt it was calling her.

Will I miss them?
Is this the solution?

She walked until she touch the water with her foot.
The water was cold, just like her heart and soul.

Am I worth it?
Will they miss me?

The waves received her as if it was her home.
She felt at home.

Yes, this is the solution.
This will bring peace to my soul.

With her last breath, she walked until she was one with the ocean.
Nobody knew it she found peace with her actions.

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First time doing something like this, if you have any advice leave it in the comments. I hope you enjoy it.

-Andrea.

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