Rose, a horror story - critique or discussion

in writing •  9 years ago  (edited)

All points of view welcome #writingfeedback

I appreciate that Rose is a massive wall of text in any format and i'll be very pleasantly surprised if anyone gets through the whole thing for a while.....even if they are enjoying it :) I would love to hear thoughts, critique and ideas.... If you have any questions, i'll do my best to answer them.

If you have not yet read Rose and would like to, you can find it here

The format for providing critique and offering discussion regarding a post came from markopaasila's fantastic idea here

For more general comments, please feel free to add response to the original......the amount of text really couldn't get any worse :)

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