REMOTE PERCEPTION - one truly good conversation

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REMOTE PERCEPTION

(Ծ_Ծ)
I swear she was way over the chance, probably three quarters of the time she got it right!

(Ö_Ö)
Oh? What does that tell?

(û_û)
Yes, so far it's just a story. Though I admit a fascinating one. Has it been tested somewhere, was it some sort of experiment?

(Ծ_Ծ)
Argh, you two! One is never impressed, the other a materialist!

(Ö_Ö)
There is nothing supernatural about it. Rather natural. Not a big deal, then.

(Ծ_Ծ)
No? Then you will have the same hit rate when we test you? Come on, we'll test you now! Lemme stare at you from behind and guess when I do and I don't!

(û_û)
Oh yes, I would like to see that too.

(Ö_Ö)
Yes, I would. And no, I haven't practiced.

(Ծ_Ծ)
Of course, what have I thought anyway? What about you? Since you are always sure that science provides crystal-clear definitions.

(û_û)
Well, what do you want to say against that? After all, science is science. I like it when things are provable. You haven't proved anything so far, just told a story. But no, I don't believe in something like remote perception.

(Ծ_Ծ)
Of course! I didn't expect anything else from you either. I don't know which of you two I should find worse!

(Ö_Ö)
A beautiful story, I think. You just don't have to be too surprised about it.

(û_û)
Yes, I also have nothing against good stories. But I am a realist. Separate facts from fiction, that's reasonable, I think.

(Ծ_Ծ)
Fiddle-dee-dee! You're just a privileged snob who believes out of your comfort zone that you can define everything! When I hear that stuck-up talk! And you! Why is nothing surprising to you? Normal? That is not normal, if someone can say exactly whether he is stared at from behind or not! That is downright impressive!

(Ö_Ö)
Well, I can imagine it could be true. Why are you upset?

(Ծ_Ծ)
I get upset because you don't take anything seriously!

(û_û)
Now, I would like to know that, too. What makes you so sure that you just believe a story? Besides, it was supposedly a hit rate of three quarters, to be exact. It got to be repeatable to be a good testing.

(Ö_Ö)
Not sure. But open for results. Have you ever had the feeling of being stared at from behind?

(û_û)
Yes. But that could also have been a coincidence.

(Ծ_Ծ)
Yes, yes, of course! Something else is out of the question! If you are lying on your deathbed and about to give up your spoon, will you call a scientist to give you the last rites?

(û_û)
Probably not. But I am not religious and therefore do not need any priest. Neither do you, by the way.

(Ծ_Ծ)
But I would like to be! I would not like to be as reckless as you two!

(Ö_Ö)
You are not that, either. What is supernatural for you?

(Ծ_Ծ)
Is that not obvious? Astral wandering, telekinesis, lucid dreams! To know things before they happen! Intuition!

(Ö_Ö)
What if you trust your intuition?

(Ծ_Ծ)
Are you kidding me!?

(Ö_Ö)
No. I am serious. Though ... a little unserious.

(û_û)
Uhm ...Now, that's nonsense.

(Ծ_Ծ)
Says who? Our Science Countess? Have you tested this hypothesis of yours?

(û_û)
Don't be ridiculous. Either you are serious or not.

(Ծ_Ծ)
Ha! Busted!! I can cry and laugh at the same time!

(û_û)
Dear, that are physical expressions.

(Ծ_Ծ)
Oh, yeah? What if I told you I love you and hate you at the same time? Never heard of that before?

(û_û)
Nevertheless these emotions come one after the other. At the moment you certainly do not love me, I can see that much.

(Ö_Ö)
Hum... You are not your "selves".

(Ծ_Ծ)
Huh? So what kind of nonsense is that again?! My goodness. You are even crazier than all the crazy people I know. You say something to him!

(û_û)
Very well. Of course I am me. Or are you going to say that you are me? HaHa! My darling, I love you, but you are cranky.

(Ö_Ö)
You know exactly where you stop and where I start?

(û_û)
But for sure!

(Ö_Ö)
Are you so sure about each other as well? At the moment I can hardly tell you apart.

(Ծ_Ծ)
So, please!

(Ö_Ö)
Pleasing and pleased at the same time. Very much so. Trust it.

(û_û)
HaHa, Dear, you are truly funny!

(Ö_Ö)
Actually, there is no "me" which is funny. But agreed - hehe - here is a funny moment.

(Ծ_Ծ)
Can you just shut up?! We talked about the experiment, Jesus Christ!

(û_û)
You shouldn't swear so much, that is unhealthy, Dear.

(Ծ_Ծ)
Go to hell! Both of you!

(û_û)
One cannot talk to him, can you?

(Ծ_Ծ)
No! YOU can't. Now get outa here!

(Ö_Ö)
Sorry, still my kitchen table.

(Ծ_Ծ)
Oh ... now it's "yours"? Than I'll go! And ...
SCREW you!

!!!
....

....

(Ծ_Ծ) I only came back again because I want to tell you that you are exactly the type of neat nurse who assisted the poor so-called hysterical women in the 50s to get electroshocked and believed rock solid that this is good science! And ... and you, don't you dare say a word about such things just happening!

END ¯_(ツ)_/¯



This dialogue is inspired by my very first "one truly good conversation" of which I did not know three days ago that it wants to become something more permanent. I am thinking to produce that in series. I like this format a lot. And the continuing design appearance as well.

The many exchanges with other writers here, like @f3nix and his @bananafish contests and the 50 word challenges, held by @jayna, as well as the Haiku art and Haiku Contest flows into a huge pot of inspiration and I feel thankful for it.
I see how writing is affecting and causing ideas, reflections and deeper thoughts about what it is like to be human.

I want to add a humorous note to the whole realm of writing fiction and poetry.

As I got myself mostly known as a serious person - without always intending it - there is a longing to counteract that and to let in the more cheesy and and winking part of my personality. This does me good and creates a different field than the one in which I usually tumble. Laughing and taking life less seriously should be on the agenda here. But you will definitely always find certain shallows and critical things with me, because I "can't" and won't write without ulterior motives.

This series (if it will thrive into one, let's see) serves me as an act of liberation, a term which recently was used by @agmoore in a private conversation and it rang on me. Also, you gave me a little hurting feedback, for which I thank you because it left me thinking (daring to step over a border is ranked by me as a good thing as we people should not leave us undisturbed).

I felt that I am binding myself too strict to a certain underlying tone and sound (sometimes suffering "me") and I want to change that.

The content of this post "remote perception" birthed itself by my interest on intuition and instinct, by watching a German multi-part movie, called "Ku-Damm 56" and the general joy of creating some characters who talk about topics which interest me. As I am counseling people in my professional life that should also be kind of obvious. :)

The creation of the characters will be a lot of fun and is it already, because I now have three of them; as you can see above. I think, I am going to use the greek school of characteristics mixed with asian tradition, shamanic and Indian ones. As there are four main characters to begin with, there can be added shades of them in between the spaces. I feel very much attracted to this method (I bet many of the movie script writers do use them - go and count the characters of series like "Friends" or "Big Bang Theorie").

the choleric, the melancholic, the phlegmatic and the sanguine.

Picture: from Of this SVG, Roland Geider (Ogre); of the orignal,Noe, Gemeinfrei, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=5153219

Some other steemit friends I would like to mention are @kimberlylane - an inspiration giver through her rich language and powerful connections of words and pictures attached to smells, @blankcanvas86 (who I admire and who had a long break) as well as @goastrighter. Please, all of you who were not named feel also addressed. You can be certain when you get me as a commenter, I do appreciate what you write about.

Lastly, I created the tag #fictionquestionmark because I always have difficulties to pick a tag when I feel a piece sits between the two "fiction" and "non fiction". Because: can you always be certain not using biographical elements? And is that "fiction"? Maybe you answer: fiction is a piece you write and it never happened to you in the described way. I'd answer: Correct. It did not happen in the exact manner and used terms but it did happen as an experience.

Picture owned: By Peng [GFDL (http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/fdl.html) or CC-BY-SA-3.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/)], from Wikimedia Commons

Most individuals tend to have aspects of their personality that identify with each of the four temperaments. However, there are usually two primary temperaments that are displayed at a significantly higher level. An individual could be any combination of the following four temperaments:

Sanguine
The personality type of Sanguine is described primarily as being highly talkative, enthusiastic, active, and social. Sanguines tend to be more extroverted and enjoy being part of a crowd; they find that being social, outgoing, and charismatic is easy to accomplish. Individuals with this personality have a hard time doing nothing and engage in more risk seeking behaviour.

Choleric
Choleric individuals also tend to be more extroverted. They are described as being independent, decisive, and goal oriented. They enjoy being in charge of a group since they have many leadership qualities as well as ambition. Choleric personalities also have a logical and fact-based outlook on the world.

Melancholic
These individuals tend to be analytical, detail oriented, and are deep thinkers and feelers. They are introverted and try to avoid being singled out in a crowd. A melancholic personality leads to self-reliant individuals, who are thoughtful, reserved, and often anxious. They often strive for perfection within themselves and their surroundings, which leads to tidy and detail oriented behaviour.

Phlegmatic
A phlegmatic individual tends to be relaxed, peaceful, quiet, and easy-going. They are sympathetic and care about others, yet try to hide their emotions. Phlegmatic individuals also are good at generalizing ideas or problems to the world and making compromises.

source: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Four_temperaments

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Love this format.. particularly with the added "faces"! All that's still missing are the voices of course and I'm still waiting for the recording!

Got me interested right away, when I saw that someone scored right three thirds of the time...ahm... 100%? Hihi... wonder which one of your characters I'd be. Gschaftlhuber?

Now you got me curious and I'll have to watch "Ku-Damm 56".. "Kurfürsten", I know, but it always reminds me of cow (Kuh) 😜

Thank you. I am really hoping for feedback as to get even more motivation to stick to this format and to be creative on it. I love it myself. And: It is not so much to read... Small morning or evening snacks, so to speak.

Ahhhhh!! I meant three "quarters" of the time! Thank you for having this eagle eye and your thorough reading. Appreciated and corrected the mistake! Phew ... glad nobody else read it so far. lol.

Scream! I love this term "Gschaftlhuber" - you cannot translate it. Yeah, he'd probably make it best:) hehe.

You know I was sitting here and reading the conversation out loud. ... Quite a task, I'd say. Maybe I give it a try today but not sure. If it sucks you never will get a chance to listen to it:)

Already produced another "conversation" and have to hold myself back not to trump them out in short time. Laughter!

Please, watch "Ku-Damm 56"! It's a high class series - also hard to take at times. Of course I was all waiting for the dancing scenes. But so worth it and reality also grabs you by the balls.

Here it is. I made it just for you:

:)) There are some mistakes in reading. And too long breaks. But what can you do? I am still practicing. LOL.
Was big fun, anyway!!

AAAHHH 👂😍👂Thank you so very much for doing this, I love it!
Nevertheless, I will now need the video of you doing the different faces 😎

😈 Uhm ... so you are the greedy devil who next not only wants different faces but also my soul? No no no. That won't happen! 😤


Thanks for loving it. :)

Just the video will do. With you wearing high heels 😇

alright, then. 🤥

YAY... can't wait to see it 😎

watch my nose ...

  ·  6 years ago (edited)

I'm back! My granddaughter was sweet and loving... a real treat. She's so appreciative of the smallest gesture. Alright, I'm done with that (feels like one of your conversations!).

I think it's very brave of you to take on a "new" form that has actually served philosophers well since ancient times. I like the themes you cover--chance of course, and the idea of where one person begins and another person ends. I can see your interest in Eastern philosophy peeping through. I also like your discussion about personality types

These individuals tend to be analytical, detail oriented, and are deep thinkers and feelers. They are introverted and try to avoid being singled out in a crowd.
A phlegmatic individual tends to be relaxed, peaceful, quiet, and easy-going. They are sympathetic and care about others

I see these two as reasonable descriptions of my major personality traits (except that I'm good at details in research and proofreading, but not in paperwork, i.e., filling in forms). However the rest of the descriptions in each category don't really fit. So I guess I'm a mongrel :)



Hello, Erika--so happy to see you experimenting. I do not have time right now to give your post the attention it deserves--anyone who experiments deserves attention. I am rushing to pick up my granddaughter (!). Later tonight I will relax with your post. And then read up on some ants, I think. Have the most wonderful, liberating day, dear friend :)

Yes, I find myself brave, too 😜... but jokes aside: Thank you for backfeeding me.
I am totally in love with philosophy as well as the asian ancient traditions in talking about the mind.

During my education we had a unit where we exclusively learned about the characters and by means of a sophisticated questionnaire and the numerical evaluation each of us got his own interpretation and was able to recognize the dominant tendencies and types in himself. This method also includes a culmination of all types and presents at the end in the middle of the cross a diamond that reveals or covers the types according to the results. A bit complicated to explain.

A fascinating occupation and one that inspires very much. I'm far from taking this too literally ,.. don't necessarily believe in something like an unchanging essence, but I see tendencies, probabilities, and habits in myself and others. But people can change radically, I have experienced that too, that contradicts the assumption of a core being. I see those tendencies as patterns and habits. As we all know, a habit is quite a strong thing :)

I would agree on your chosen tendencies as they reflect how I got to know you so far. Isn't that fun?

Most people hate paperwork and do it without passion. Then, of course, there is no drive to become good at the details.

Bye, my friend and thank you for coming back and taking your time.

I had fun sorting through your conversation. Quite an interesting turn of mind you always have, Erika. And of course we take from what we've learned those things that make sense to us. We're not automatons. Looking forward to more "conversations", and also to listening to the tape--tonight :)

There were times others liked me functioning like an automaton. Glad, that does not happen on a regular basis. HeHe. Or maybe I just got ignorant about that. Our minds ... yeah, what an abyss.

The tape: lol, I had so much fun. Maybe I feel embarrassed one day, but I don't care.

It's getting late and so my mood also drifts into evening mode. ... Tomorrow is a day off.

Hey, thank you for giving me notice. :) Have fun with your granddaughter! Looking forward to read your opinion. And what the "ants" are doing. lol. Haven't understood that but it sounds funny.
Bye for now, my friend.
Love,
Erika

Wow, it took me a while to get it... I got really confused by the ö_ö etc. I first thought it had to do with a new phonetic approach, hahaha! I guess sometimes I'm really not the brightest bulb in the room...Keep on expressing yourself! If I were you, I'd just keep on writing and experimenting. If you enjoy it, then you have already won. Regardless of what others say :) Quite an interesting question you raised in the end. What is fiction? It leads to the question what the opposite is. Is there objective truth? Is there one reality? Or isn't it always at least partially fictional?

Thank you for coming even though I insisted a little for you to visit:)

I beg to differ for the "regardless what others say" part.
There's no point in creating something just for oneself. You want to share it so that it gets feet and is not just spirit. It's not enough that only I have fun with it, even if it's the most important part. If you haven't seen, heard and felt what you're doing in this world through what is feeding you back, it's very difficult to live a happy life. You want, for example, your courses to be attended and thus share something with the world. ;-)

Your musing on fiction and objective truth cracked minds and is a fascinating object to look at. I think for the most part our mind is constructing it's reality and everything which is not being done by hands and feet but achieved through thinking is for a huge part already construction if one is not careful.

I am so looking forward to get to see you in Hamburg!

"I felt that I am binding myself too strict to a certain underlying tone and sound (sometimes suffering "me") and I want to change that."

Exercise added to my to-do list. I didn't know you had named me, thanks for that :)

I'll search for you in youtube soon!

HaHa! So you see that too in yourself? Shake hands!

  ·  6 years ago (edited)

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