THE GRAND Original Feature Length Screenplay -Part Four

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EXT. WOODS, RIVER LOCATION -MORNING
Kevin sits on a log taking a break from his work. His lumberjacket is filthy and his jeans are torn and there are circles under his eyes. At his feet rests a well worn Builder's Manual. Kevin is exhausted but the building at the rock has progressed considerably. All three posts are in the ground and joined at the top with roughly hewn 6x8 boards. The foundation wall is finished- a rock and mortar face circling the base of the structure. The floor has been framed with a few planks nailed over, and there is piping leading through the floor down and out the side of the foundation towards the reeds.

Kevin blows steam from his cup and gazes out over the water. It is a clear fall morning with little breeze; the trees are just starting to turn and a light frost lays over those areas still in shadow.

Theresa approaches from over the rise.

THERESA

Kevin..?

Kevin turns and smiles when he sees her.

KEVIN

Hey babe! Glad you could make it!

Theresa flops down onto the log next to Kevin, wincing slightly because she sat down too hard. She leans her head into his shoulder and looks up at him.

THERESA

Sorry I couldn't get out here sooner. My Dad found me out and blew his top.

I was lucky to make it out here at all.

KEVIN

I know.

THERESA

You knew? How could you know

anything all the fuck out here?

KEVIN


I figured it out Theresa. These

things tend to run a predictable course.

Theresa wraps her arms around Kevin’s neck.

THERESA

Really? So tell me John Edward, how

do you see all this working out?

She motions her chin to indicate the construction site.
For a moment a shadow passes over Kevin’s face. Then he looks at Theresa with a smile that seems like a grimace.

KEVIN

We're gonna have the coolest place

ever Theresa. We'll be better than anyone else in this town.

EXT. LAROCHE HOME -DAY

The front walk. Andrea is at the door, talking to Theresa who is in the doorway.

ANDREA

I need to see him.

THERESA

Join the club. My folks got me

grounded 24/7 around here.

ANDREA

Still? Jesus it's been long enough.

THERESA

Yeah, well...

Theresa shrugs her shoulders and leans against the door frame. Andrea regards her for a moment.

ANDREA

So where is he?

Theresa just shakes her head slowly, eyes challenging, lips pressed tight. Andrea nods patiently. She reaches into her purse and pulls out some cigarettes.

ANDREA

So Mary she's been tooling around Bridgeport trying to find these "cousins" of his...

Talking some shit about you too ya might wanna know...

She offers a cigarette to Theresa, who accepts the smoke warily.

THERESA

Nobody listens to her.

She accepts Andrea’s offer of a light.

ANDREA

True...

The two young women smoke in silence. Andrea looks up at the house.

ANDREA

Folks home?

THERESA

Mom's picking up Jesse from soccer.

Be home soon.

ANDREA

Yeah...

Andrea takes a pull from her cigarette and then stubs it out in a tin can provided on the porch.

ANDREA

Alright then I gotta go... Listen Theresa.

Theresa regards Andrea and waits.

ANDREA

We've all known each other a longtime here... And I know that for you and Kevin, well, it's
always been the two of you one way or the other... So I'm not going to intrude for now. But I
want you both to understand- you're not the only one who cares about him.

THERESA

I know.

ANDREA

We’re worried.

THERESA

I- he knows.

Andrea looks down at her feet.

ANDREA

Okay then.

Andrea turns and walks away. Theresa watches her and smokes her cigarette.

INT. WOODS, RIVER LOCATION -DAY
Theresa is helping Kevin install a window into the now roughly completed wall.

THERESA

I wish I could get out here more often. The folk's are still keeping a tight leash on me.

The only reason I could today is because they're dealing with Jesse now.

KEVIN

Gentle Jesse? Say it ain't so.

THERESA

Fighting at school no less.

KEVIN

Well he's at that age...

THERESA

Yeah okay Dad.

She steps back and looks at the installed window.

THERESA


So where'd you get this from?

KEVIN

Found it. Side of the road.

Theresa looks around surveying the interior. The frame of the house is completed, with the outer walls finished. The house hugs around the rock like a grasping hand. Steps lead up from the main room to a smaller room nestled in the bough of the tree. Theresa shakes her head.

THERESA

You are like some kind of building monster man.

KEVIN

Some kind I guess.

THERESA


...So Andrea says everyone's

worried about you.

KEVIN

Yeah Bill told me.

Theresa looks at Kevin with surprise.

THERESA

When did you talk to Bill?

KEVIN

At practice.

THERESA


Prac- You're still with the band?

How the fuck you managing that from out here?

KEVIN


I don't manage the band, I just play in it.

THERESA

You know what I mean. Like how do

you even get into town from here?

KEVIN


Walk. Yeah and speaking of which-

how are you getting out here these days?

Theresa looks away.

THERESA

I'm riding my bike again.

Kevin stares at Theresa.

KEVIN


...You? YOU rode your BIKEY here?

THERESA

Shut up...

KEVIN

Oh man I still remember- “If you

don't get your licence the day you turn sixteen I'm breaking up with you!”

THERESA

Yeah and I meant it too. But for

now I can't use the car so...

Kevin walks over to Theresa and puts his hands on her hips. He kisses her on the nose.

KEVIN


Let's go take a look at the old chariot.

EXT. TRAIL IN WOODS
Kevin and Theresa make their way along the trail, close to reaching the road.

KEVIN

So it's that old granny bike?

THERESA

One and the same.

KEVIN

Oh man that's gotta be a bitch.

THERESA


Don't talk shit about my Gran-

Theresa stops in her tracks.

There is a MENNONITE FAMILY waiting in the clearing where the trail meets the road. Two men, Father and Son, and a Horse and Buggy with the Mother and two Younger Children within. The men appear to have been inspecting Theresa’s bike as well as the tire tracks in the dirt. They turn and look at Kevin as he approaches. Theresa hesitates and then follows.

KEVIN

Hello there!

FATHER

Hello.

The Father gestures towards the bike.

FATHER

Is that your bike there?

THERESA

Yeah it's mine.

The Father briefly regards Theresa, then turns his attention back to Kevin. The Son looks on impassively.

FATHER

What are you people doing out here?

KEVIN

We're building a place off the Grand River. On Crown Land.

The Father looks to his Son and the two share the hint of a smile.

FATHER

Crown Land you say...

Kevin takes the initiative, moving forward and extending his hand.

KEVIN

My name's Kevin. And this is Theresa.

Kevin motions towards Theresa with his free hand.

The Father looks at Kevin’s hand for a moment. Then he takes Kevin’s hand in his own and leans forward, locking eyes with Kevin.

FATHER

Kevin. Have you been stealing?

The Father's grip tightens around Kevin's hand.

KEVIN

No Sir.

Kevin evenly returns the Father's stare.
The Father releases Kevin’s hand and steps back.

FATHER

Very well then.

The Father turns and walks over to the Buggy, stepping up into the Driver's seat. His Son follows and climbs into the the back seat. Without another word the Father lifts the reins and the Buggy pulls out onto the road, clopping slowly away. In the backseat the Son continues to fix them with his steady gaze, until the Buggy is well off into the distance.

Kevin turns and smiles at Theresa.

KEVIN

Didn't steal from anyone around here, anyways...

Continues...


Chapter Four of an ongoing serialized screenplay.

Chapter One

Chapter Two

Chapter Three

Writing and image by Greg McCann, the author of this post and owner of this Steemit Channel. Originally posted in May 2012 as a submission to the [Amazon Studios site under the working title of "Freedom"](https://studios.amazon.com/projects/10747#contributions/17778).

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