RE: FREE WRITE : SHORT STORY 500 + WORDS

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FREE WRITE : SHORT STORY 500 + WORDS

in writing •  6 years ago 

Hello @brittandjosie,

LOVE this story...
First, I never learn the main character's name. Intriguing literary tool that I utilized in my first novel...
Second, I especially value the conundrum "does he or doesn't he open the letter?"
Yes, he wants to know what's inside, WHAT IS THE REASON that Hannah departed? And of course, nosy friends & family need to know and cause unnecessary emotional pressure...

I'm glad he chose the torch over the letter opener...

Well done!

Peace and smiles

writing
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      ·  6 years ago 

    Hi @jimmyoblog I did the freewrite and you are not supposed to alter after writing so I could have done somewhat better but as a writing virgin I was satisfied. Love that you liked it. Going to read some if your blog cause I dint think we e met before.
    Have a great sunday

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        ·  6 years ago 

      Hi @brittandjosie, our Steemit paths have crossed before...I am the newbie (obviously ;-))...I enjoy your posts very much!

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          ·  6 years ago 

        Ouch..... i did not know i hope i Welcomed you?

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            ·  6 years ago 

          Yes...you helped to make me feel very welcome!

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              ·  6 years ago 

            Thank god !

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