Fact or Fiction? - 3

in writing •  7 years ago 

Friday's story Here was completely TRUE.

Yes, I do feel guilty for helping in part to cause the death of the tree. That may be the reason I plant trees whenever possible and keep the 'free trees' that I find sprouting in my garden (scattered, no doubt, by birds).

Today's story then - Fact, fiction - twist/no twist?


When I was at school, at the start of term at the beginning of the fourth year, I was invited to join the Headmaster’s ‘elite’ – to become a Prefect.

Yeah, there was a certain amount of responsibility and work that came with the ‘position’ but there were also a few perks.

Staying indoors at break times (especially in winter) – patrolling the classrooms and hallways to ensure no unauthorised pupil roamed inside, being looked-up to by the younger kids who still did as they were told, was another.

I told the Headmaster that I’d agree to being a Prefect but I didn’t like going to morning assembly – I never followed a religion and it seemed like a waste of time. He agreed to put me on ‘Late Duty’ – catching kids coming into school late, taking their names and handing the list to the Secretary when I’d finished.

It wasn’t such a bad job, unless it was cold, or wet, of course.

One morning, a girl from my class came in through the gates around fifteen or twenty minutes late. It was too late to send her to join the assembly in the main hall, so I told her to go straight to first class and wait there. The teacher should have already been there, so the door would be unlocked.

I followed a few minutes later, after I’d handed the list of names in at the office.

When I got to the first class where the late girl should have been waiting, the class was silent. I was a little suspicious, not only should the teacher have been there, but she should have been there too.

Her bag had been left at the side of the table where she usually sat and her coat hung over the back of the chair.

Off to one side of the class stood a large stationery cupboard, more like a small room than a cupboard, if I’m honest. I heard a noise from the cupboard and went to investigate.

The cupboard door was always locked but as I pressed down the handle, the door opened. Inside the small room, I saw the teacher, his back to the door. He turned his head and commanded me to, “Get out!” and I would normally have obeyed, but I saw something deeply disturbing further in.

Trapped in a corner and almost out of sight, the late girl cowered in the corner.

She leaned to one side so that I could see her and her eyes were wide and brimming with tears. She looked as scared as any person I’d seen to that point.

“Get! OUT!” the teacher barked at me.

“Let her go,” I said. I sounded much more calm and confident than I felt and I have no idea what I’d have done if he’d refused.

The girl tried to take advantage of my distraction and slip out of the corner but she appeared unable to push past the teacher.

After a moment of hesitation, I stepped forward and grabbed for her hand, pulling her past him. She seemed somehow pliant - easily manipulated, I suppose – unable to act for her own safety.

I pushed her behind me and we left the room together, then she grabbed her coat and bag and left the room.

The teacher came out of the room and came towards me. I was just a skinny 15-year-old and would have been defenceless against a full-grown adult.

It then came my turn to be saved.

The rest of the class started filing in and no more was said. I don’t think I made a friend of that teacher because of that incident and the girl never spoke to me about it.

The rumour-mill of school gossips didn’t seem to get hold of the story and the girl remained in school.

I can only assume that she was too scared to say a thing about the incident, to anyone, but I do wonder how she remembers that incident.

Thinking back on that moment, I can believe she was stricken like a ‘rabbit in headlights’, unable to move, her mind shut-down, waiting for the predator to strike.

There were a few predatory teachers in school as I remember. A couple of sexual predators and some that just liked to wield their ‘power’ over the kids.

I know a number of stories about kids that were brought to tears for no other reason than the teacher felt like it.

Still, those stories gave me a good foundation for my parenting skills. I always made sure my kids knew that I had their back if they were being bullied. They always knew they could tell me about any incident and I always investigated.

The important thing here, though, is that if they were wrong, they had misbehaved and deserved the detention, I sided with the teacher and enforced the detention – at home too, for making a fuss when they should have taken the punishment because they deserved it.


So… Truth or Fiction?

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A good story as usual. I think it's mostly fiction. Especially the incident part seems established as coined phrases.

All true, unfortunately.

Well, this is intriguing. I think i wish it to be fiction...

I think it is partly true. The part about the girl in the closet might be a bit twisted...

Unfortunately, even that was true.

We were warned not to get caught alone with that teacher - for this very reason.

That is a horrible experience! And I bet nothing ever happened to that teacher either and he just carried on...

Him and a couple of others...

It's hard to determine fact or fiction as sometimes fiction can be truer than fact and fact stranger than fiction.

upvoted and resteemed.

Thank you. You're right. It is difficult to decipher.

This seems like a fiction to me. However, good job for saving that girl from the predator anyway! : )

I think that bullying (whether teacher to student or student to student) is a way too much neglected topic and we should raise awareness about it as much as possible.

Cheers!

It's all true. The predator was someone we were warned about (other kids did the warning, parents didn't seem to get the same 'memos').

I wonder if parts of it are true. I struggled to believe one of the bits early on:
"I told the Headmaster that I’d agree to being a Prefect but I didn’t like going to morning assembly – I never followed a religion and it seemed like a waste of time. He agreed to put me on ‘Late Duty’ "

No headmaster I ever came across would ever agree to not attending assembly!

So I'll say "false"!

It's all true.

My husband is very straight-talking and always has been. He negotiated the 'deal' with the headmaster so that he didn't have to go to assembly.

I think the story is true, even if not this particular incident is fiction because I've seen so many people go through this and it is honestly very disturbing .

It really is disturbing. Thank you.

I would say, mostly false, but don't ask me why. Many facts seem perfectly logical because there is a little bit of truth wound into them - and I think that's the case here. Looking forward to finding out the answer. :)

It's all true I'm afraid.

Well, I got that one completely wrong ... so it was s0ul's story, and true. Wow.

Yeah... he saved a girl from who knows what. To say he's a bit of a bad-lad, he's a bit of a hero.

I would say TRUTH.
Truth or not, it-s a great story showing that even a 15 year old girl can take attitude :)

Correct! Apart from the gender... it was my husband's story, not mine :)

Oh. Great that he also writing. Does he have Steemit account ?

I wrote the story. It's one from the school we both attended when we were children. He has his own account - @s0u1

Thank you for asking :)

you Michelle can create an intrigue that the reader could understand the truth or fiction are in front of him. The story looks convincing, so for sure it is very difficult to determine to which category this applies :)
I liked the courage of the guy on whose behalf this story was written, so I can confidently judge that part (60% of the history) is true - in our world such a turn of events is possible
And as a matter of fact, we'll find out later :)
Thank you

100% true story :)

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

I think it's completely true, no fiction involved this time. You were doing only what your moral duty forced you to do.

Thank you. The story was true, but it wasn't about me :)

Truth-Twisted:)

It's the type of thing that happens a lot. And you're the kind of person who would have done exactly that if it had been real. But my sense is that at least some of it is fiction.

The part that's fiction is that I hint at it being 'me' when it was Trev's story in reality. Otherwise, the story is all true.

That explains why it seemed like it could be a true story, but I just had a feeling it wasn't quite you.

Well done! Haha! :)

I think this is a true story of a student about their childhood adventure. This is very informative and useful story for the kids and parents. This is the fact of our society.
Thank you so much for writing about an important fact.
You are doing a great job keep it up and stay Blessed.

I haven't been by in a while and just stop and read this I say it's fiction since you like to write fiction

Hi!

Sorry... this one os 100% true :)

sorry to hear it is true ... people get away with this way too much

They sure do. Sometimes, I really do hope there's retribution in the afterlife because they certainly don't seem to get it in this one.

Scary for the future of children when there are sex predators in school.
Very nice story of yours today, awaited other stories from you

You are very intelligent writter, i like your all post specially task, thanks

It is really sad when told to get out of the classroom. May there be forgiveness

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I loved this post it was beautiful. And really inspiring

Amazing and beautiful story, Well written. You are doing a great job. Thanks for sharing @michelle.gent

You write this story in an interesting way, it make me feel real, looking forward to your future post.
Children should be protected but .....
Nowadays there so many bullying happened out there, take advantage of the vulnerable groups.

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What a story full of strong feelings after reading this stopped a little not silence and plush each as if every word you say it has a special meaning this Post, which monitors the street died by the students in the teachers and gilrs teachers and really your story There are really many girls and teachers do this not Only in one country or two do I think it is a really important issue and I thank you very much for this fact or fiction

Nice article,,
this is very Interested

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Unconditionally it is good story.Good description about childhood,adventure .I focus mainly writting skill .I have like it very much

Wow this story is touching.. I will tell my family to read it ! Thanks a lot 😲

wow,nice story of a school girl.

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i like and love this history........
thnx for sharing this history

I'd have to go with "truth", and i'm writing this before I've looked at any comments, in case there are 'spoilers'.

Because it's chilling, and because I'm of a similar age and I remember what school was like back then.

I admit, though, I hope this is fiction.