RE: STEEMIT WRITING PROMPT CHALLENGE: Write a story that breaks my heart in less than 300 words (Can be true)

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STEEMIT WRITING PROMPT CHALLENGE: Write a story that breaks my heart in less than 300 words (Can be true)

in writing •  9 years ago 

Wow. Damn. Fantastic writing. Is it a true story?

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Nah. Just condensed/skipped to climax version of an idea I had to put a twist on the Invincible Warrior archetype to make it more tragic.

I liked it a lot. Your other story you posted too! With this prompt, the illness/death premise is always going to be heart wrenching if done right. I don't know if you saw the little story I posted for this too, but it was based off a thing I saw on Facebook a long time ago. Someone posted: Write the 4 saddest words you know. And a friend of mine responded: "The girl died alone." It always stuck with me.