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(or possibly as an alternative to one) can already be understood from the first sentence.
so I though I would start a discussion thought
Basic Funding. By using the conditional "could", the proposal sounds less convincing. The proposal could sound more convincing without it. The proposal sounds more convincing without it.
More Incentive to Provide Backer Updates. Please add the problem to the beginning.
Benefits to Steem as a whole. This is an interesting point to many of us, so elaborating more would be nice.
Steemit as it stands at the moment, can already do everything that I spoke about. I would add a comma after "Steemit".
A simpler way to tip creators (and associate it with individual projects) would make it even easier. is a bit hard to understand. Suggestion: "To make crowdfunding easier, there should be a way to give creators tips associated with individual projects."
As a more long-term goal, creating a separate site that will support crowdfunding may be a good idea (perhaps funded through the techniques I speak about here). maybe "a frontend to steem dedicated to crowdfunding"
In my mind I see it as acting in a very similar way to the current, centralized crowdfunding sites, such as KickStarter and IndieGoGo I don't get your point. Please take some distance and read again :-)