WESTERN WEDNESDAY - I start a story and you continue in the comments!

in writing •  7 years ago  (edited)

I start a story and you continue in the comments where the last person left off!

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"All aboard!!" The train conducter, Shouts as the loud whistling of the steem engine sees the train ease out of the old junction. The train is packed with workers and rail equipment, but it is also transporting the cash supply and rail road bonds to the new office.

The train roars through the pristine forests and into the plains, just about half way there. The train is quiet, half the folks riding are workings that can't help but rest their eyes. "That is up until the tracks get blown out by a keg a dynamite, boys," explains WILLIAM (29) tracing his finger on a rough map of the trains route."

"Now lets giddy on up and get that money!" William shouts as in one smooth motion he swings himself up onto his horse, pulls his bandanna up to cover his face and kicks the horse into gallop.

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Getting closer to the doing the wrong thing never felt so right. William is about to press the button to blow up the track. Yunk lays out a loud chuckle. Little does William know Yunk put the dynamite underneath the train that William is on.

"Hey Yuck, I'm about to press the button..."

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

But little did they know....Yunk was a ZOMBIE. After 30 seconds of non-movement, Yunk's eyes fluttered and in one swift roundhouse swipe, he tore out the throat of a nearby passenger. #Yunk lept to the ceiling and crab-walked towards the caboose, shattering glass and ripping steel. Intent on being free to roam the open range....

... as they approach the train they, they smell it. A smell they would not soon forget. The smell of Yunk, the spirit aboard the train. Yunk had been locked away for years in this host body keeping the mortal barely alive long past the typical human lifespan. It had remained in this body for One hundred and forty six years, two hundred and sixty nine days locked in this god forsaken crate. Yunk was counting the days until he could be released and finish what he started. Yunk was sick of the host bodies stench, it was unbearable... but then he heard them coming... finally... a new host....

And then yunk died a gruesome death.

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I can't think in story this early in the morning, but I will be back to enjoy this wonderful concept!

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Thank you mum!

along the harsh brush filled trail they rode, until they came to a junction of sorts, and were met by a small crew of men, fixing a few rusted spikes on the track. The two groups of men exchanged pleasantries and where on the path once again. The smell of smoke was getting stronger as they approached a rock filled embankment that they had to navigate to reach their destination, the train. The horses took slow and short steps to maneuver around the boulders. Once they had reached the top, they had plain sight of the train and the destruction that lay ahead of it. Smoke was billowing out of several cars ahead of the all important money train.

getting closer to the money train, william and their band were getting really excited, but never have they thought what they are up to. The little they knew that the train they were after, was not just carrying money, but was also moving an evil spirit to a secluded place far away from the trace of human existence. Now they are just few minutes away from the train....

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A cool idea! Thanks for sharing!

Thanks I will keep em coming

Wow this is such an epic, innovative idea with the commentators continuing the story o weeeee :)

ha thanks, why don't you play?

See below :)

Awesome!

Thanks, looking forward to more from ya :)

This is a little bit challenging let me think my answer LOL

Next time she is going to ask folks to number them so we know the order of the story