Everybody check out this book that I'm writing.

Hi, everybody it's @tacogranda. I want to tell you all that I have been writing a book called The Flaming Two. Every week I am going to post one chapter of the book on steemit. The genre of the book is fantasy. I would really like you to give me feed back on the book so I can make it better. I hope you all enjoy the first chapter. If you like it you can read the next chapter next week. This is also a first draft so please be flexible with spelling errors and punctuation.
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                                      Chapter 1
              My life gets screwed up really bad

“Wake up Wake up c'mon we need to go now! We're going to die come on please Wake up”
“What the hell it's two o'clock in the morning”
“ I know we need to go right now”
( Bang Bang Bang )
“Open up”
“ Damn they found us we need to go now. We can hide in the attic.”

Hi, my name is Johnson and the person that i'm screaming at is my friend ember who is my roommate we are both 17. The reason that i'm doing that is because the local raiders from the forest came and did the biggest attack they have ever done. So… yeh.

“I’ll grab the gun you go up to the attic” I say. She goes to the attic like I asked and I get the gun. In the background I hear the Raiders say “We're coming in.” Then they break down the door
That's when I start sprinting up to the attic. I climb up the stairs and and close the door right when the Raiders break in I hear one of them say “Take anything that could be useful.”
Then I said “ Please don't find the the gold, please don't find the gold.” then I look up and ember is crying. She has her blond hair right over face the way she always does when she cries. She really hates her feelings. Then I notice the how much food was in the attic and I remember that we put a bunch of food up here incase this actually happens. And thank god we did because we might be up here for a couple days. When Ember looks up her cheeks and nose are a little red. She sniffs and says “How long do you think we will be up here”
“ I don’t know “ I say “ my guess is about 2-3 days”
“ Ok, lucky we have all our food we stored”
“ yeh”
The next day we hear the Raider leaving with all the stuff they took. We go down the stairs to see what we still have and what we find something really surprising. Everything was left, they even left stuff that wasn’t ours. “ I have a bad feeling about this.” I said “ It does not feel right”
“ Yeah, it feels like… they're coming back! Let’s go right now c’mon!”
We run out the door and see the that Raiders are coming we hide behind the house just in time so that the Raiders did not see us. But right behind the house was a Raider smoking a cigarette. Im able to push him to the ground and cover his mouth before he could alert the others. Then ember punched him and he went unconscious. We took everything except his cloths. The weird thing was that he did not have anything that was modern he had a sword and a drawn map and cloths made from bear hide. We had no idea why they had all this stuff.They could have easily just bought or raided a nearby store. Me and Ember looked at the map really close and it looked like it was leading to their nearest base. We decided to follow the map through the woods. And we found a trader with his cattle bleeding to death. We helped him as best we could and started on our way again. But when we were walking Ember noticed something. She noticed that if there was someone hurt wouldn't they have a car and a phone that they could call someone with and also not have all their stuff on some cattle? That got both of us wondering, first the Raiders with medieval age stuff and a trader carrying his good with cattle it just didn't add up. We were both really confused. Then Ember says
“Did we just go back to the medieval ages.”
“ I think we did, man our life is really screwed up right now.”