Writing Authorship, "Galaxy Protector"

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Long ago, before humans were introduced to the dimension of time, God created this universe as nothing but a dark, empty, empty space. Then ..., He created an energy ball, which he blasted into billions of small balls. Still, those little balls, too big for humans. And He, again, blew each small ball into a very, very small grain. He even refined every little grain, until it was very smooth. After four stages of refinement, then he was enough to sustain a civilization of mankind that would someday live among them. And the grains of sand that we know as a galaxy. After the galaxies are formed, God, .. lowered his first pair of humans, whom we know by the names of Adam and Eve. They were formerly residents of heaven. However, for whatever purpose, they must leave Heaven for a while.
The two of them are not lowered in the same place, but they are lowered apart from the opposite end, and they have to search for each other to get back together.

Because they both find it difficult to recognize the giant balls or galaxi. So Adam asks for mercy from God, so that the galaxies are too big for him, to be further reduced so that they can both mark where they have lived and searched. And God granted his request. For the umpteenth time God resolved the small particles we call these galaxies into millions and even billions of objects smaller than each of these galaxies, which we know as stars. After the stars are formed, Adampun starts his seeker.
After so long he searched and kept searching, finally they reunited. They are very happy and grateful to God because they have reunited. They are brought together near a star, which we later know as the Sun. How pleased Adam, and they both did not want to leave the place. Therefore they decide, to settle there.
Then Adam approached the Sun, and took part of the Sun's core, and took it to where his lover's Eve was waiting for him, the place where they were reunited.
Upon arriving, Adam immediately builds his dwelling by dripping a little of his blood at the core of the Sun that is just as large as an adult's head, and he prays for the will of the Almighty, then lifts the core height from the sun with both hands and exerts its power, making the core of the Sun spin and increasingly enlarging, absorbing the energy that surrounds and be a round object that we call the planet.



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After he was sure big enough for them to live, Adam stopped him, and they both immediately occupied his new home that we now know as the planet Earth. And to further complement his creation, Adam also made mountains, forests, and all the things he had seen and learned in Heaven including the palace where he had lived. Although not as perfect in heaven but because of the sincere love between the two of them, it does not matter, because Heaven is too big and too beautiful that he can not and can not imitate.

Told today, in a small village, precisely in an old shack that was almost destroyed by the age of the village dipinggiran.Hiduplah an old widow and her only child. Their job is a firewood search, because that is the only job they can do, with all its limitations.



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The old lady was named mak Ucah, and her son was named Arif. Arif who was only 18 years old, only able to finish school until Primary School course. Because as a seeker of wood, of course, the income that mak ucah gain is not sufficient, and can only meet the needs of eating for that day alone, let alone added mak ucah that is too old, when considered maybe now he is about 90 years or so, you can imagine how busy . Arip can finish his elementary school is more than enough for him, and even then because of the help of a landlord who had been lending his vacant land to live in.

One night, in front of his hut. Arif looks cool with his favorite book, which he got from his schoolmates when he was in elementary school. A book that tells of the magic lamp Jin and the lamp owner as his parents, where the magic genie is able to provide whatever his parents want. A very promising book for the dreamers, not least Arif. Because maybe it was just a fantasy that was free but satisfying entertainment for him. Finished reading, As usual Arif fantasized to fall asleep on the bench as well as his bed. Because the hut only has one room only, and that too only for where mak Ucah rest, so in other words the front porch is a room for Arif.

When Arif fell asleep, suddenly there stood a man with his face covered with mustaches, beard, and hair that was so long and thick unkempt.It seems how long the man did not cut his hair and his mustache. The man approached Arif, and touched his wise head with his palm. After a few moments later, he released it, and patted Arif on the shoulder with the aim of waking him up.

Arif woke up, and how shocked he was when he saw the creature in his place. With a sense of fear, surprised to mix a little excited, because who knows, if it turns out that creature is a genie lamp that he often read in the book. With a sense of anxiety, he was courage, to ask the man who was in front of it.
"A ... a..what k..ka..you jjj..jin llla..lam..sandal jjjeppit ..?" Asked Arif digress. For when he searched for a magic lamp, he could not find it, and there was a man standing right on his scraggly sandal.
The man just smiled, saw Arif's fears, while answering questions from Arif.

"No ... I'm not a genie. I'm an ordinary human like you. My name is Ahmad, the first descendant of Adam, and I was the 71st child of 112 siblings at that time. "The man's answer, apparently Ahmad, is a bit odd.
"Oohh ... I guess .." Arif did not continue his words, in his heart he was a bit disappointed, even aroused suspicion. "But ..., looking from the appearance of Mbah, and clothes Mbah, surely Mbah the magic, Yes ..? "Asked Arif again still curious about the person in front of it, and now his call changed to mbah. Probably because the man in front looked very old.
"Not really ...." Ahmad answered with a smile.
"Continue ..., what business, Eyang Mbah Ahmad come here ..? Want to give a talisman yes hehehe .. "Arif to GR an and the more origin, he called the man in front of it.
"No, I have nothing to love. I'm here because ... I decided to stay here. "Ahmad's answer seemed even more awkward.
"Eiitt ... Where can Grandmother ... anyways ..., My mother will not allow grandparents not to live here, what else ..., this is not our house, so we do not have the right to decide yangEyang ..." Arif obviously more disappointed only, and now he's more sure if ahmad is not the jinn or the magic he hopes, but just a passenger or a bummer.

"Ohh ... not so nak .. not my intention to stay in this house, but ... never mind you will not understand. Only tonight I want to take a rest for a while, just tomorrow morning I will continue my journey. But if it turns out I'm going to bother you, I'd better just go now ... "Ahmad said as he immediately stepped left Arif who is not behaving.

But Arif immediately prevent it "Oi .. a moment ago dong ..., this night Eyang Mbah sleep here aja.Soalnya, where there are people who want to give a place to rest with people not clear like Mbah Eyang, might even be presumed devil let alone the middle night, "Inwardly, Arif felt sorry for the man, especially since he looked so old, smelly and dirty. And wise also decided to accept Ahmad to temporarily rest there.
Ahmad went back, and laid his body on the wooden floor next to the bench of the wise, without a base or blanket.

"Oh yeah grandmother ..., was Eyang said the child to 71 out of 112, what ngak wrong? What kind of family ... "Arif asked, as if toying with, a little tone" Maybe this is crazy ..iiiihhh "Added in the heart.
"Well tell me a little about who I am, and from now on do not call me Grandma, call Ahmad"
"OK ... !!!" said Arif. "How Mbah Eyang Eyang Mbah only ..." Ledeknya in the heart.
"I am the first descendant, from the first man in this universe. My brothers are scattered throughout the universe "
Arif smiled "Well ... now I'm sure. Sure that you are really gilla he .. he .. he. But the story is okay, okay .., for a bobo introduction "Sela Arif cut off the conversation while reversing his face towards Ahmad.

Ahmad went on: "It used to be so beautiful, very beautiful ... !, even the size, 10 times bigger than the present, because my own father made it. But after the incident ... everything changed "Ahmad paused, looking around him just enjoying the surrounding air.
"What incident Mad? Emang used to be a world like? "Arif cut back and became interested in his new friend's story. The imaginary system in his brain starts to return to work, like a new oil change engine.

"According to my father's story, they were my father and my mother, the first man God created and they had once lived in heaven. They are created by God directly and educated by God too, surely he is perfect as a human. And it is not difficult for him to make this world, look like heaven though not as perfect as heaven, because they ever know what heaven is like "
"Is not this earth the creation of god?" Ask Arif. Feel less agree with the story content of the man, though only a fairy tale though.

"It is true, all that is in the heavens and on earth is the creation. But through the hands of human beings, and certainly by the will of Him. A small example, who do you think created this house? "Ahmad throws a small question to Arif" Surely God ..!, But through human hands. So does this Earth, and the planets scattered in the sky there, except the stars. And that's what my father told me about "Ahmad paused.
"How strong and powerful is your father? it's hard for him .. to imagine him "Sela Arif again, he finds it difficult to imagine what kind of characters and events in this Ahmad story.

"To make it easier for you to imagine the power between us, I will try to explain it more simply. My father was the first man, and had 12 sons and 171 daughters at the time, when we were still living together. But his only son inherited that power. And the strength of his 12 sons was equivalent to one of my father's powers. When among us there is a dead or born a new younger brother then by itself our strength decreases or increases, and it applies generations.Therefore, why we often feel stronger and sometimes feel weaker.Itu caused by the process of the occurrence of displacement energy from one human to another if there is a birth or death. Now do you think you are a descendant of Adam? "Ahmad asked Arif.

"Thousands maybe, millions, do not know anyway ..." Arif replied unconvinced.
"Let's just say millions. Means, my strength or he .. My father, maybe millions of times or more than that. Or just like this, how many people on earth do you think?" Ahmad tried to clarify again.

"A billion maybe" Arif replied wonderingly. Because he only knows the largest number is billion and the number of people of course according to him very much and commensurate with the billion.
"Let's assume one billion. And out of a billion, most of them are only three or four generations. Just one generation thinks of 250 million. And that's new in the world, if multiplied by millions of habitable and scattered planets, how many a generation in the power of my father is probably stronger than 250 million times the millions of planets. However, only strength and supernatural powers that he inherited, the rest depends on the man himself "
Arif was more confused by the numbers but he tried to stay focused "Keep up with the events you mentioned ...?"

Ahmad returned the story "It used to be a very beautiful world, until one day, my older sisters had to fight and even fight, without my father's knowledge. So, there is a great battle between them, so that the earth is devastated, even one of them has to die. Father was sad to know the incident, which eventually, father separates every descendant of his man, one by one. Each one of the offspring, separated by a galaxy. Because father knows, if keturunanya someday, will fight each other whose name of power. And I inherit this galaxy where you and other humans live and live today. Because I have not had any offspring even today, so I decided, some descendants of my older brothers will stay on earth, and some other planets are digalaxi this "

"You mean the planet Mars and the others? Then what's that galaxy? Is your kingdom !!? "Asked Arif. For him let galaxy, the planet and the moon he considered the same. Equally unanimous.

"In the past, the planet that sheltered the sun was just the earth, and the galaxy was the gathering place of the stars including the sun." Clearly Ahmad is more superficial, knowing wisely will not easily understand what he is telling.

"Just pass the part, I'm confused, the other part aja deh ..?" Said Arif, hoping there is an event that tells the story of satisfaction, because he still think, if it is a fairy tale.



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"After that incident, I never saw my parents again. Maybe because, Dad was busy taking care of the place for my other brothers, who are certainly far away in the hemisphere. Actually living on this earth is not only human, but the jinn also live on this earth, and the planets where humans are. That's because they are very dependent on human strength at that time. Only, they multiply very quickly, until in a few hundred years the world is already crowded by their existence. Make the humans who are on earth feel disturbed by the existence of those who are dirty, dirty, stupid and sly. But there are also people who always sided with them, because the cunning of the genie is able to hypnotize humans with all kepalsuanya. Then there was a war between them, and again it happened without the knowledge of my father or me.Because for several hundred years, I live in one planet from the star or the other sun. I am also very angry, because when I returned, the only remaining few human beings who behave like a genie, even more despicable than that. As well as some factions of the agitators who accompanied him. So I took an action by destroying all the Earth's contents, including the Earth itself. After all, I rebuilt this Earth, in the hope that people will live in peace. To enliven the world as well as manage it, I brought some tribes from nearby planets, and made some other planets still close together and took refuge in the sun, for the jinn to live. With notes to the jinn, not to disturb humans. After a few years living on earth, I also felt I had to go back. This time I went to find out where my father was. In addition to being homesick, I also had some questions I had to ask directly to my father. And from then on, it's only now that I'm putting my legs on this ground again "Ahmad paused a moment. He turned to his right and smiled as if to say hello, but there was no one there and Arif was also on his left side at the time.

"Wow ... not wrong anymore ... emang bener bener crazy ya, the proof of his own smile" Arif said in his heart, when he saw the behavior of ahmad just "Udah ah .. sleepy next time aja story" Arif said while turning his body back to Ahmad.
"If you just come back after millions of years, how can you know my language?" Asked Arif with his back to Ahmad, this time Arif sounded like testing Ahmad's story.
"That's because when you fell asleep, first I learn the language you use" Answer ahmad as it is.
"Ha ... ha ... ha ... smart also you .. smart ngeles haha..haha. dah ..ah tidurrrr "Arif said as he covered his whole body with his gray blanket.


Meanwhile, far in the dense forest there, disebuah jin genie in the head or led by one of the jinn king named Asuni. Asuni is the king of the genera of the fifteenth of the Devil, and the Devil himself is the first genie whom God created long before God created Adam. Asuni led his kingdom for more than thousands of years and the day that his power has been diminished due to increased human poppulation, since they have promised the previous owners of the earth not to disturb human existence, Asunipun can not do anything because he is very afraid of the power of owner of the Earth.
That night the middle of the asuni gathered as usual partying with some of his favorite soldiers, enjoying a little offerings that he got next to the big rock where he resided. Suddenly one of his soldiers was running toward them. While panting jinitupun warriors directly facing the king like to report something very important.
"Danger of danger ... danger. Di..di .. he's back! "He exclaimed in a clipped voice.
"He who you mean ..!?" Ask Asuni sounded annoyed to one of his soldiers that he think has disturbed his pleasure. And somehow he always felt upset and upset by this one soldier.
"Ahmad .. just like that. Ahmad the ruler of this earth "He replied breathlessly.
"What do you mean, Ahmad son of Adam ..!?" Asked asuni slightly seriously responded to his soldier's report.

"How do you know if he is Ahmad, who ever told by our ancestors ..?" Ask Asuni more want to make sure.
"While I was looking for food in a village, I listened to two human beings. And one of them confessed that he was Ahmad the son of Adam. Hambapun try to approach him and see him from the front want to ascertain what kind of Ahmad it is. It turns out he is able to see the servant, unlike humans in general. In fact he had time to smile to the servant ..ohohhhh how nice to see him smile hi..hi.hi "The jinn said that even admire Ahmad when Ahmad smiled at him. Because for the rest of his life no man ever smiled at him, who ran in fear if at any time they are shown.
"Enough…!!! Shut up .. !!! You stupid, had time to admire him. You better not go wrong this time. The last time you reported that in the past 2000 years, there will be doomsday, Where is the proof ...!? "Asuni is always annoyed with the reports of his always inaccurate soldiers. He wanted to put a large stone behind him, to gag his soldier's mouth.
"That's because I heard it from human speech, that the year 2000 will happen doomsday" The soldier tried to defend himself, while the others just laugh at him is not clear.
"That's because you are all stupid ...! Especially you !, you alone are a freak of gossip, and when people talk about it you even yourself are deceived" This time asuni angry, especially when the other soldiers even laugh, here's some what they laugh.
"If we are stupid, why humans are afraid of us ya .. he .. he?" Whispered one of jinn who perawakanya slightly fat to the theme of his thin skinny body.
"That's because humans are also stupid" replied the duller jinn.
"Rather according to the story of our ancestors, humans are smart and strong?" Add the jinn who are fat.
"Then ..., because they hang around with us..he..he..he" They both laugh in a whisper.
"What if we just kill him .. !!!" There was a shout of one of the genie who was behind, full of spirit.
"Stupid..! Do you think we can? Now let me see what weapons do you have to fight against him? "Ask asuni to all the jinn who were present at the time.
"It's great ..!" With great confidence, the warrior took out a branch that he always carried wherever he fought.
"Ahhrrkkkk ..." Asuni pounded on her own head, annoyed. "Let alone kill Ahmad, to kill the mosquito you have to practice for the rest of your life. Are you still not aware, if for thousands and even millions of years my throne is still just like this "Asuni pointed to a big rock that is behind him who always be where he lived." Even Until now there has been no development ... ohh .. how upset me with this stupidity. "Asami complained that he was tired of the stupidity of his people.
"It seems that we must meet our ancestors, the king of Gholun who is on the Planet of the Ring" The intention of Asuni is the planet we know by the name of Jupiter.
Asuni rushed to make his journey to meet the king Gholun and all his soldiers. King Gholun is the highest king in our galaxy region or a galaxy we know by the name of the Milky Way or Milky Way or Via Lactea.

"I do not understand, who is that stupid ..?" Back the fat jinn who had whispered again to the theme during their journey.
"That fool turned out to be our king ..." replied the skinny genie.
"Heu ... heu ... heu ..." They both laughed quietly.
*****
As always mak ucah always wake up most mornings. After bathing in the river, he then prepares breakfast for both of them, he and his son.
"Jang ... hudang ... hudang! (Nak..bangun..bangun)" Exclaim mak ucah wake Arif who is still asleep.
"Mmmmhhhh ...." Arif just wriggled with eyes still tightly imprinted, because last night he slept rather late to listen to the story of Ahmad.
Mak ucah then immediately approached him and wiggle his son's body. "Yeuh ... yeuh ... hudang ..!, Geura kadituh .. .., jeung saha eta? Meuni karunya teu terse simbut. Kamalinaan maneh mah kabaturteh (Hey ... hey ... wake up ..!, Quick shower there ..!, Continue who is he? Poor, do not you love blanket.Salam you are too much for others) "He cried as he asked who was sleeping under his son's bed.
"Mmmhhh ... galaha ma '.. kenwae lah, da tereh gelo jelemana oge (bum bu..biarin aja lah, it's almost crazy people too)" Arif replied then wake up awakening while his eyes are still sleepy.
"Huss ... tong kitu siah..kabaturteh, doraka deuleu !! (Huss ... do not be so you against other people, sin know !!)" Ucah blasted unhappy with the behavior of his son, which he considered less polite.
Arif immediately moved from his bed and immediately bathe in the river. After the shower he immediately woke ahmad.
"Oi ... wake up there ... continue if you want to cut and shave my hair, under my bed bench there is scissors ama razor, quickly there bathing ..!" Arif woke Ahmad and told him to shave so as not to look too dirty.
Because it is very coincidental Arif had hair cutting equipment that he used to cut hair his friends, just to add-added pocket money for him.
Ahmad immediately follow the advice of Arif and immediately bathe and mendapihkan.Selesai clean-up he immediately met Arif and mak Ucah meant to say goodbye and grateful for having allowed him to settle in their home.
But how astonished Arif to see Ahmad who was not as old as he thought, maybe even at least five or six years older than him and even more surprising it turns out that Ahmad is a very handsome young man, his tatap so charismatic and authoritative. There does not seem to be a human as handsome as he is on earth today. And, moreover, Ucah, he kept staring at Ahmad without blinking.
But Arif immediately alert him. "Ma '.... Call ah ... geus nini-nini, jiga parawan wae. Teu pantes atuh, bita ge tara kitu (ma '.. ugly ah ... dah grandmother, kayakgadissaja.not appropriate dong, ordinary also not so very) "Arif said curtly, feel her mother's eyes are too excessive and inappropriate, unusual with his age behavior. But in his heart Arif realizes, anyone who sees him now will surely be fascinated, not because his mother is ganjen, because he knows very well how his mother is, and it is impossible he thought all kinds of ahmad.
With a slightly nervous face, Ucah invites Ahmad to have breakfast first before he leaves, by setting aside a meal for himself. "Mumuluk heula atuh jang! Tah ..! Bae teu jeung nanaon oge, nupentingmah halal, quasi kulah! (breakfast just de! Nih .. no if there are no side dishes as well, which is important halal, let's eat!)

And Ahmadpun immediately eat with gusto, like a new first time to see food after so long not eating.
"Ma '.. Seagrass of the Ahmad ngilu cicing didieu, teu nanaon? (Mak '.. if Ahmad stay here, is not that right?) "Arif asked his mother's permission to accept Ahmad to stay.
"Ari ema'mah teu nanaon but, ... naha daek breathe jiga kieu? (If it's not a problem, it's just that ... what does he want to live like we are?) "Mak Ucah did not mind his son's proposal.
After receiving permission from Ucah, Ahmadpun immediately thanked Dan in return for the kindness of the family he offered his help to always find firewood, accompanying Arif.
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In his journey into the woods to search for wood, Arif never stopped questioning and even asking a similar question. Either because of her chatty nature, or feeling very happy with her new friend. Which is definitely not like ..., because he is still normal.
"Mad ..! I saw last night your face was so irregularly kept your cats also blindly. How many centuries are you unshaven? "Arif asked unclearly but Ahmad could understand.
"That's because over the past few years I've never had a bath and a haircut"
"Just stay in which city, so you can not find water? Keep drinking how? "Looks like Arif wants to corner his theme, because he believes his answer must digress and hard to believe and considered funny.
"During that time I was on my way to here and of course there was no water in the sky, and to drink I brought water supplies while departing from the neighboring galaxy, and I drink it once a year and during that time I never eat. But it has become a habit for me who likes to travel from one galaxy to another galaxi "Ahmad answered innocently in accordance with Arif's expectations.


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