Far away you go leave me
Cut off love throw me
I didn't think it was this fast
Everything disappears like dust
What is blown by the wind seems to have no meaning anymore
in front of you
I really want to run from your shadow
It's really inappropriate
Your attitude gets rid of me
I really didn't expect you to make me suffer
Really not worthy of a woman like you
It breaks my heart when I remember
How sick I am
When you say you will be alone with him
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Your words capture raw emotion and the pain of loss with striking clarity. The imagery of things disappearing like dust blown by the wind effectively conveys a sense of impermanence and despair. The contrast between the speaker's feelings and the woman's actions creates a poignant tension, making the reader empathize with the heartbreak and longing expressed. Overall, your poem evokes powerful emotions and paints a vivid picture of love lost and the struggle to move on.
Beautiful piece
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