Great that you can see some of Stephen King's style in the story. I grew up reading his books and consider him one of my writing mentors. I really wish I could write like him!!
Two people already ask me what happens next? I'm more into giving the endings to the reader, letting them decide or be intrigued by what will be.
But, I wrote a parallel story in Spanish, from the old woman's vision, there I glimpse an end.
Here the link:
Thanks, I shall certainly give it a read. I will have a think about an ending to this one too. Have you read 'on writing' by Stephen King? I found that quite good. I love his style, but its not my style if you know what I mean. I can certainly see he has had an impact on you.
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