El loro charlatan

in hive-161155 •  last month  (edited)

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Disfruto de una paraulata que brinda su hermoso canto,
pero qué difícil es la burla cuando un loro habla tanto,
repite y repite mis errores con mi amada,
¡lo siento, mi amor, lo siento!...,
¡no me mientas, no me mientas que no eres un santo!

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The parrot


I enjoy a paraulata that gives its beautiful song,
but how hard it is to mock when a parrot talks so much,
repeats and repeats my mistakes with my beloved,
I'm sorry, my love, I'm sorry!........,
don't lie to me, don't lie to me, you are not a saint!

Traducido al inglés por DeepL.com

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      ·  last month (edited)

    Dear Free Writer,

    We continue our #wewrite journey with our last lesson an introduction to poetry. We hope you had fun. Don't forget to read your comments, they can be very useful. Below you find the review of your publication which is part of We-Write-Lesson 6.

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    Poetry: Limerick

    Remark: Creaste un poema que al imitar el canto del loro le da ese toque muy gracioso. Me hubiera gustado que además agregaras la traducción.

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    Lista la traducción @inspiracion

    Saludos y feliz día.

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    Genial 👍

    Gracias.

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        ·  last month 

      Muchas gracias por su apreciación y apoyo. Estaba pendiente de la traducción, la agrego en un instante.

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          ·  last month 

        Hola @casv

        Fantástico, según lo que pude investigar, cumpliste con lo pedido en cuanto a número de versos y rimas.

        Jugar con la repetidera del loro, da mucha risa, me imagino a la amada chillona.

        ¿El estilo de este verso me recuerda una canción infantil venezolana sobre una pata o animal que regresaba, no pude acordarme ni encontrarla en Google.

        Era algo como...
        ... "su pata volvió... solo puedo tararearla,.

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          A mi me suena familiar esa canción infantil, lamentablemente no la recuerdo bien.

          Muchas gracias por su valioso comentario y apoyo.

          Te deseo mucha suerte y éxitos..

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              ·  last month 

            In a hurry? How about answering the question? 🤯
            Pity you kill engaging. ☹️

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              Greetings, friend @casv:

              Very good your Limerick; the attitude of the parrot brings the touch of humor typical of these compositions, but the poem announces it, and shows it with the repetition of the words in the verses, that these birds are used to say the same thing many times. Each word then provides its own meaning and contributes, in addition, to imitate the parrot's way of expression...

              Best wishes, my friend

              Saludos, amigo @casv:

              Muy bueno su Limerick; la actitud del loro aporta el toque de humor propio de estas composiciones, pero el poema lo anuncia, y lo demuestra con la repetición de las palabras en los versos, que estas aves acostumbran a decir lo mismo muchas veces. Cada vocablo proporciona entonces su sentido y contribuye, además, a remedar la forma de expresión del loro...

              Éxitos, amigo

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                Muchas gracias profesor por su análisis que aprecio mucho.

                Por el igual le deseo muchos éxitos.

                Saludos y bendiciones.

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                  Amigo, creo que en esa comunidad debe publicarse en inglés; agregue una versión del poema traducido...

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                    Gracias amigo, ya la agregué.

                    Saludos.

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                      ♥️🍀👍

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                        I am not sure if the parrot is a charlatan but it might be a good thing to replace its language or the bird. It sounds like a burden to me to hear those words repeated 24/7.

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                            Jejejejeje me gusta más la versión en español, confieso que suena mejor en nuestro idioma jejejeje, muy linda la imagen por cierto, esa guacamaya majestuosa con los clores de la bandera.

                            Te felicito por haber llegado asta acá, mi favorito fue "El guardián", lo logramos llegamos hasta el final.

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                              Felicitaciones por igual. Te confieso que en idioma inglés rimar tal vez lo hubiera logrado pero el transmitir el humor en otra cultura es algo fuera de mi alcance.

                              Saludos y buena suerte.

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                                Me pasa igual, recuerdo que hubo una tarea que estaba segurísima de que me había quedado graciosísima y se prestó a confusiones, aprendí que la traducción, la diferencia cultural y los venezolanismos hacen mella a veces.

                                Peor lo importante es aprender y conocernos, para mi la experiencia ha sido bonita a pesar de estas limitaciones.

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                                    Post promocionado en X.com:

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                                    Saludos cordiales.

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                                      Aja, dale lorito desenmascara al traidor jaja no contaba con su astucia, me gusta amigo, buen trabajo, te felicito, fue cansón el curso pero bonito compartir con usuarios amantes de la escritura, lectura y super creativos.

                                      Saludos a la familia.

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                                        De igual manera fue un reto participar con poco tiempo disponible, he estado muy ocupado con mi trabajo, pero lo hago con mucho gusto.

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                                          Gracias ,igual saludos por casa.

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