goodbye
There are no days
which harbour even a
fragment of the cold,
It has all dissipated now,
Slowly but surely
evaporated into the stillness of the wintery years.
I don't like to admit that I think of you,
But if they were to ask me about you,
I'd say one thing,
'I forgive you,'
I guess holding on to hurt runs its course,
Like every season.
Til the time comes and it is time to bid it farewell.
I bid every inch of you,
Farewell.
Goodbye my love,
I wish you nothing but sweet dreams.
Great piece of artwork there...
I think the overall tone represents the sense of liberation that comes when one is able to finally let go of something or someone that has been in his mind for so long, and the thought brings not only sad memories, but also a feeling of longing for that past one knows will never return.
But it also represents how one acknowledges that this person has brought true unforgetable feelings and would like to honor them by remembering with kindness and joy, instead of focusing on the "stillness of the wintery years".
The true sense of forgiveness expressed, along with the understanding that "holding on to hurt runs its course / Like every season " shows that the speaker knows that this dark feelings are something needed to be able to let go of this past, and start thinking of the joyfull times that once were the only thing that mattered.
Great work, pal, definitely will follow and keep on reading your poems.
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Beautiful post friend, really very sencible. You already have another follower, I also invite you to go through my blog, I'm new to steemit but maybe something you like and you can support me with your vote. Greetings.
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Lovely words bro... you always share touching poems.
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good post!! beatiful pic ! it's your?
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