『Concept』 아픈 마음 풀어주기

in poem •  7 years ago 

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마음이 아플 때 우리는 가까운 사람들에게 아픈 마음을 털어놓습니다.
어떻게 해결해야 할지 몰라서라기 보다는
위로 받고 싶고, 이해 받고 싶은 마음에...

그러나 돌아오는 말이 나의 단점이나 실수를 지적 받는 충고라면
가까운 사람마저 먼 타인으로 느껴지고
마음 문을 닫게 하여 더 큰 외로움을 느끼게 됩니다.

정말 내가 좋아하는 사람이 아파서 날 찾으면
그냥 그 사람의 아픈 심정만을 읽어주려 하고
상대방이 나에게 편히 기댈 수 있는 마음의 자리를 마련하여
따스한 사랑을 느끼게 하여 줌으로서
서로의 관계를 더욱 깊게 만들어 가는 것이
세상을 살아가는 즐거움을 하나 더 얻는 것 아닐까 생각합니다.

오늘 사랑하는 사람의 아픈 마음을 풀어주는
사랑의 청량제가 되었으면 하는 마음입니다.

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Woff, woff!

Hello @soonhee0229, We have met 2 times already!

I'm a guide dog living in KR community. I can see that you want to contribute to KR community and communicate with other Korean Steemians. I really appreciate it and I'd be more than happy to help.

KR tag is used mainly by Koreans, but we give warm welcome to anyone who wish to use it. I'm here to give you some advice so that your post can be viewed by many more Koreans. I'm a guide dog after all and that's what I do!

Tips:

  • If you're not comfortable to write in Korean, I highly recommend you write your post in English rather than using Google Translate.
    Unfortunately, Google Translate is terrible at translating English into Korean. You may think you wrote in perfect Korean, but what KR Steemians read is gibberish. Sorry, even Koreans can't understand your post written in Google-Translated Korean.
  • So, here's what might happen afterward. Your Google-Translated post might be mistaken as a spam so that whales could downvote your post. Yikes! I hope that wouldn't happen to you.
  • If your post is not relevant to Korea, not even vaguely, but you still use KR tag, Whales could think it as a spam and downvote your post. Double yikes!
  • If your post is somebody else's work(that is, plagiarism), then you'll definitely get downvotes.
  • If you keep abusing tags, you may be considered as a spammer. It may result to put you into the blacklist. Oops!

I sincerely hope that you enjoy Steemit without getting downvotes. Because Steemit is a wonderful place. See? Korean Steemians are kind enough to raise a guide dog(that's me) to help you!

Woff, woff! 🐶

좋은 글귀네요. 한결 마음이 편해졌습니다. 감사합니다

kr-guide!