Very strong ending. Those words will stick with me
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Internal Ocean - Original Poetry
Very strong ending. Those words will stick with me
Thanks @hami. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Really glad that the final lines had the impact that I wanted. It's kind of a sad poem but comes from somewhere deep in my subconscious and from the past, which I have left behind. Ha ha, maybe I'll try writing something happy next poem I write. Thanks for checking it out mate :-)
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