Complexion perception
the deadliest foe
that turns eagle eyes
into arrows
that turns arrow heads
into skin
and pierces our human vale
I gave you enough
gold to garnish
your plate with which
you love to harness
all that comes along
and pass your way
but wealth was simply
not enough
you would rather
choose to cuff
this wraith who knows
their life will end
Good morning, Friday
I hope to find you
In less desperate times
to satisfy myself
with your siblings
soon I will say
My time with you is no better or worse than the other days
Where is the auction
for my worth?
where are the regal
nobles and clerks?
when will I stop
my external valuation?
the web of wonder
bends time
to join the best
in locked step
so freedom is aquainted
with every breath
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wow!!!!!!!i can't remember had i ever read so nice poetry
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weekend just got better with this poem :)
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@rubenalexander you are creative, always have an idea to write a poem, I really salute with the results of your work. Because it is always successful and very beautiful. I've written a poem in my post, but it's just a little, but I think all day to be able to write the poem. You will always be my motivation to write a poem. thank you
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Very lovely thanks for sharing
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Great poetry . Your publications at the level are always enjoyed @rubenalexander
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Wonderful pictures and i like your post @rubenalexander
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Frankly it's a wonderful poem and Wonderful pictures Especially its reflection on water
thank for sharing it with us
Thank you also for your support
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poetry is very beautiful I like to read it
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Very touching poem.I like your writing very much it makes me feels good all the time.Great job.@upvoted
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I love how effortless it seems to convey emotions in few words (in each line/stanza). The beginning is sublime, it hooked me right in.
Perception as the deadliest foe. I love how slowly eagle's eyes (glares, I suppose) become more than just eyes and pierce one's soul. Yet, you described it so eloquently with the arrow imagery.
I hope that one day I will be able to write as effortlessly as you make it seem to be.
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beutiful..
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With diction so strong and illustrations conspicuously birthed from profound meditation, this poem is outstandingly deep and beautiful. Well done @rubenalexander
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nice every day I am waiting for your poem, I am interested to know the latest story in every poem you post, I am curious about the latest story of your poem @rubenalexander, thank you
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Literature is part of life......& you represent it very exquisitly...... I enjoy your poem.. thanks @rubenalexander
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A very good poem, I love poetry, I also learn to make good poems like you. Thanks for sharing
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Very good practice.. to be continu ...
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really it's beautiful poem.such a wonderful. thanks for sharing a nice poem.hope it's like to everyone.keep it up.go ahead.
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i like your poetry nicely done amazing
Poetry is a form of literature that uses aesthetic and rhythmic qualities of language—such as phonaesthetics, sound symbolism, and metre—to evoke meanings in addition to, or in place of, the prosaic ostensible meaning. Poetry has a long history, dating back to the Sumerian Epic of Gilgamesh. Early poems evolved from ...
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Sure seems pretty nice words with beautiful meaning !
Nice Poems buddy !
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well posted sir @rubenalexander
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