I am heading over to you
I don’t know
If my weaknesses
Will sabotage
My identity
Give me a little
Wiggle room
Double cup our conversation
Plastic wrap each premonition
Chocolate coat my caveats
Until your losses
Are null
Two graduates
Come from ivy leagues
They are together
Previously tied
The common bond
Is one that eludes
The overlap is
One that exudes
Prevailing chains
Aren’t just in the mind
Common ways
Come before held hands
They walk out together
As a band
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Brava! if I were familiar with poetic analysis I would have given you a meatier comment. But I have been out of the poetry world for years now, I am actually excited to see that there is a vibrant poet community here. Specifically the Haiku community.
This makes my heart warm, and my soul happy. All those wonderful things.
On a serious note though, love poems are some of the most difficult to write, because of the irresistible urge to regurgitate cliche, and this you did not do. I did not cringe and this piece put a smile on my face.
good work
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right! it's so nice poetry
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I'm glad the cringe factor was at level 0.
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@rubenalexander i really loved the way that you wrote rhyme of the words and you give the meaning of your deep feeling you make a great one goodjob :)
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Nice poetry 😍
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Beautiful work keep it up and thanks for sharing
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a remarkable poem excellent it is @rubenalexander
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Your post very excellent
I like your post
nice photography,,,
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great words and this poem has deep thoughts inside.. <3
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I may understand that poem :). LEDA feels sometimes traped in some overlaps :|.
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the common bond and the together, take away all at in together.
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wow..hear is a amazing photography....i like it very much....i hope everybody like your post...thanx for shear it
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Wonderfully done!
I love the pictures you incorporated to hit the meaning home of this poem. You can feel what you’re saying, it brings together past, future and a future.
Can’t wait to read more!
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well nice good to see your poem work that how you poems with simple words @rubenalexander
and these words are really better to imagine a good couple that
They walk out together
As a band
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its quite beautiful to read excellent poem
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its a beautiful poem thanks for sharing its very nice :)
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give me some wiggle room hahah i like that very much :)
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Awesome poetry keep it up @rubenalexander
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you just rocked this one with your creativeness.its a beautiful poem thanks for sharing its very nice :)
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Those are pretty great buddy !Liked the 1st one ,has deep meanings though !
Nicely done buddy !
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