Poetry Slam challenge 11 - I Thought I saw You

in poetry •  8 years ago 

I thought I saw you

Was I dreaming?

You took my hand


Wreckage strewn around me

The dream

My noble plan


I grit my teeth against the pain

As I lie here

On this sand


Fevered hopes for rescue

The sky, the seas

I scan


I pray this note to find you

Tell my love

As best I can



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      ·  8 years ago 

    Thank you for posting @sazbird. Lovely......touching...wistful....hopeful.

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        ·  8 years ago 

      Thank you @bleujay, that is a very kind comment

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