RE: I Will Not Break

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I Will Not Break

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

Mmm I like how in your face and uh..Fierce? those lines feel. Ending each couple with that one word made me spit it out aggressively as I read it.
I'll definitely be checking out your other stuff!
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Thank you some much for the thoughtful feed back! It is delightful to hear how a poem hits someone because that is so hard to predict. That was definitely what I was going for. Thanks for the follow!