Still Hope
Nothing left to pull from
I think my irises have drained
The original blue color
Has begun to fade
That mysteriously dark black
Has turned to a dull grey
My eye sight is starting to lack
Each color is a darker shade
My mental awareness is no longer here
The only thing I feel is fear
There's no hope for what is to come
I wish I could change my sum
The sum that equates to my life
Has set me up for a long list of strife
All it's individual components
Are multiplied by painful exponents
I just wanna take a break
From all these detrimental quakes
I wanna escape all these tsunamis
That keep chasing after me
I just want some rest
To reset my soul
So that I can give life my best
I just need to persevere
And overcome all this nonsensical fear
By Ethan
2017/07/08
Woww amazing picture
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This comment has received a 0.15 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @hamzaoui.
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Amazing post
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Really amazing post :0) great reading and so true we all need a break sometimes and recharge our soul. Thx for sharing. Followed
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Thank you :)
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Ur welcome :0)
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everyone need a break! Our souls need love
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great post overcome fear
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That was beautiful
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I loved it ⚘
Well done 👍🏻👏
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there is no hope the wave on track and the death is back
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That was my feeling when I started writing the poem
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It seems to me that ur poems help u a lot to get through the difficult times by expressing urself. It's nice to see u get so well rewarded for it as well :)
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hope sustains life. :)
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nice
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Rest is one of the most important factors in good health... and is often sadly lacking from fast-paced, stress-filled lifestyles. Sometimes we need to hear the message that it's ok to take a break, it's ok to sleep in, it's alright to give yourself the space you need to rejuvenate. Hope you have a good day Ethan!
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Thank you :) very true indeed. I hope you have a good weekend further ☺
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A poem full of meaning, which makes you look deeper.Thank you.
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My pleasure
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Wonderful poem. We all feel this way at some point. Like we need to reset our souls from the pain of life. Well written. I feel your work.
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Thank you ☺
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Do you watch any youtube channels that send this message? What inspired you to go into this direction. Apart from the waves, of course :)
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I am inspired by my emotions, the original title was "no hope" when I started writing it but then after writing my mood lightened and there was hope again :)
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@xxsenpaixsamaxx
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qed, writing "@xxsenpaixsamaxx", you summoned the info service of @qed:
98.305% of steemers have lower reputation than xxsenpaixsamaxx.
98.685% of steemers signed up later than xxsenpaixsamaxx (2016.05.28 at 10:27:36).
Hope that helps. Take care!
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There is still hope and much more. Be patient, be still and rest your heart and mind. Let it heal and become strong again. What looks dark and black/grey to you will eventually evolve into a light color and then a fuller color until it reaches a deep and rich color of the rainbow. Remember, there cannot be any rainbows of hope without the rain and storms. There cannot be understanding of joy and happiness without the pain and hurt. Life is about balance. The pendulum swings to the left/dark. Eventually it will swing to the right/light. Then it will rest in the middle so you can thrive. Hang in there!
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very insightful, Thank you :) I was in a glum mood when I started writing but as I progressed on this piece my mood started to lighten.
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It's okay to have moments of glum. That is part of the healing process. The main thing is that you release anything that is pent up because holding it in is detrimental to your core. Just like the song Frozen, "Let it go". :)
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Very Nice
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<3 resonating deeply.. i write poetry too, feel free to peek~ im just starting out here :)
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Very nice, Will be looking forward to your posts.
up-voted :-)
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Hey! thats a really nice poem! I will be following you.
please do follow me :)
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https://steemit.com/biddle/@biddle/biddle-s-poetry-contest-1
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