RE: 🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #9 SUBMISSION THREAD - WHO WILL TAKE THE CROWN?? 🎧

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🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #9 SUBMISSION THREAD - WHO WILL TAKE THE CROWN?? 🎧

in rapchallenge •  7 years ago 

pocket full of lettuce smoking on that seaweed/Im a vegetar(i)an nah i dont do beef/im more into bleu cheese keep knots like my shoestrings/ yall talk we do things tune into the new thing/pudding from me proving put in work while im cruising/strap my bodyguard let her sing Whitney Houston/"I will always love ya I will never judge ya/ but if u threaten mine u a shot mf'er/watching for the ops watching for the bots/cuz they gon turn into sentinels & do us worst than the cops/reaching for the pinnacle thats going to the top/and still take my losses like a man i never flop never dat/out them streets shit was getting hot mane/on to the next hustle it dont stop mane/godspeed in my jesus shuttle cuz he got game/whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain

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So laid-back, packed with knowledge, dope style broseph!

''whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain''

you ended your verse so smoothly with that one, damn, really digged that

Thanks for the love homie! im humbled

This is a real verse. Liked how you lace your perspective through the verse and keep it personal. Nice flow, and you had a couple cool punchlines in there too.

Liked this:
out them streets shit was getting hot mane
on to the next hustle it dont stop mane
godspeed in my jesus shuttle cuz he got game
whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain

Hit me back with some feed if you have time.

Thanks 4 the feedback bro!! keeping it personal the easiest way to go when writing, for me anyway lol...but yea i did make a point to make that verse gel together, glad u peeped it!!

You was picking my brain here man.
watching for the ops watching for the bots/cuz they gon turn into sentinels & do us worst than the cops
That's real, love the whole thing tho

Preciate it bro...yea the direction things moving in kinda scary

Pre-Matrix and Terminator visions...

precisely...

haha yeah that's a dope line

"out them streets shit was getting hot mane/on to the next hustle it dont stop mane/godspeed in my jesus shuttle cuz he got game/whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain" bro you said a mouth full with that line and it will go over a lot of people head. Keep doing what you do my G. @opinizeunltd

thanks for the love homie! glad u caught it...

i like your style man..

preciate it bro