La filosofía: The personal narration, the little lore that tingles in the air. I see the steps of a new writer on this platform and I see the effort made. The rivets of sentences, nearing what it is called "bullet-point syndrome" but subverting the horror trope of stalking with the complete humanity (and innocence) of the nine-ten year old child. That one begins to question who really was the child and why the narrator hadn't merely confronted it in the first place. Yet I guess, I guess, a simple play and subversion is good here. I see, I see! What a wonderful craft what thou hast made here, reminding me off the joke creepypastas of old yet remaining much more in the personal diary essence of a confused and shocked narrator.
La forma (The form): Of course, now let me impart some rather cheatsy ways to improve the quality of your writing just by merely shifting the form around (remove the dots in each of these):
The <.html> and <./html> html ensures you can input HTML code into your posts. They must be inputted first with <.html> first and <./html> last.
The <.p> and <./p> html helps make paragraphs.
Example using <.p> and <./p> to make a paragraph.
The <.i> with <./i> and <.em> with <./em> html italicizes words.
Here I use the <.i> and <./i> italics and here I use the <.em> and <./em> italics.
The <.b> with <./b> and <.strong> with <./strong> bold words
Here I use the <.b> and <./b> bold and here I use the <.strong> and <./strong> bold.
To move along, this is the <.h1> and <./h1> html in action
The <.h2> and <./h2> html in action
And the <.h3> and <./h3> html in action
The <.br> html is useful in commenting to add a paragraph break when yah don't want to constantly want to hit enter all the time.
And also useful when paired in twos to make a paragraph within the same <.p> and <./p> html parameters
And there is so much more to formatting which can make or break a piece. You can infinitely shuffle the html (except <.html> and <./html> with them starting and ending, respectively, html code), but most do it in the order you placed them in the first place. Or really if I got X, Y and Z in that order, I shall have to close them off by /Z, /Y and /X. Also remember to close those html coding, else it shall break everything! Hoped yah save this comment somewhere and reword it to something yah can comprehend, because this shit will be useful to be recognized and gain a following here on Steemit (and to just have nice looking posts...)~ c:
