RE: Lonely

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Lonely

in war •  7 years ago 

Pretty good, but why did you use a lack of punctuation in some parts, while not in others?

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To be honest I am not sure. I wrote this in about 15 minutes whilst babysitting my grandchildren, I had an idea that I had to get down but at the same time also had to mind the children. I will do better at punctuation next time