steem poem - 봄눈

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봄눈 @jjy

이슬방울 보듬은
홑잎 닮은 눈동자
풋사랑보다 서툰
하늘 파란 날의 이별

물 오른 버들가지
움트는 날까지
함께 하고픈 속맘에
베갯잇을 씌웠다

갇힌 발자국 풀어
추억 하나 놓아 주면
앞질러 나비춤 추던
살구꽃 그림자

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대문을 그려 주신 @cheongpyeongyull님께 깊은 감사를 드립니다.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    함께 하고푼 속맘에 베갯잇을 씌었다
    크으... 이런 표현은 도대체 어떻게 하시는지
    역시 글쓰는 것도 타고난 재능이 있어야 하나 보내요
    좋은 글 감사드립니다

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        ·  7 years ago 

      감사합니다.
      타고난 재능도 중요하겠지만
      저는 무조건 쓰자입니다.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        와 대문도 이쁘고 사진은 오늘 아침인가요? ㅎㅎ 팔로와 업봍하고 갑니다!

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            ·  7 years ago (edited)

          감사합니다.
          눈 내린 다음 날엔
          몽환적인 분위기를 자아냅니다.
          감사합니다. 맞팔했습니다.

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              ·  7 years ago 

            눈 내리는 날
            한 숨 쉬어가게 해 주는 글 감사드립니다....^^

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                ·  7 years ago 

              잠시 쉬어 가도 좋고
              발자국을 새기면서 걷고 싶은 날

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                봄을 맞이하는 느낌이 오는 시네요
                감사합니다.

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  감사합니다.
                  봄이 점점 가까이 오고있습니다.

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    jjy님
                    서정적인 시를 읽으니
                    마음이 차분해집니다..

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      감사합니다.
                      예쁜 둥이 키우시려면
                      잠시 머물곳도 필요하시겠지요.
                      제가 조금이라도 도움이 도면 좋겠습니다.

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                          ·  7 years ago (edited)

                        차분히 내리는 눈을 반기며
                        봄을 기다리는
                        조용하고 소박한 시골 마을이 그려 지네요 ^*^

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          잘 보셨어요.
                          냇물이 흐르는 시골입니다.

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            봄이 오는지
                            눈도 다르게 느껴집니다.

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              바람도 볕도 달라지고
                              눈도 한 층 부드럽고 물기가 있었습니다.

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                봄눈에 메마른 대지가 살아나네요.!!!

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  이맘때 많이 건조하지요.
                                  가랑잎도 물을 달라고 혀를 내밀고

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    창가에 맺힌 물방울과 겨울의 눈이 내린 풍경이 아주 마음을 착 가라 앉게 만들어주는군요.

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      저도 지나오면서 고개를 뒤로 돌리고
                                      한참을 보았습니다.

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        이런 감성은 어디서 오는건지..
                                        이런 감수성 가지신 분들 너무 부럽더라구요.
                                        저는 다소 매마른 사람인지라..ㅎ

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          일단 시작해 보세요.
                                          사물에 대한 애정을 갖고

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            봄눈 이라는 제목에서 머뭇 하네요^^; 시 한점 잘 먹었습니당

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              감사합니다.
                                              봄이 바로 앞에 있답니다.

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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                눈에 경치가 나풀거립니다~^^

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                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                  진눈깨비를 연상케 하는 사진입니다.
                                                  그러다가 조만간에는 눈을 구경하기가
                                                  소원해지는 날을 맞이하게 되겠죠...

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